Talk:The Kite That Went to the Moon

Hello there, the link you used for "Evelyn Sharp" is for an American aviator and not the British author. Here is the proper link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evelyn_Sharp_(suffragist)

Summary Confusion
In the end of the story, did the kite return to the sky as a comet before Jerry and Chubby were able to show it off to the other children? I found that part a bit confusing. Madwel (talk) 22:41, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

Characters
The characters section would be more concise if listed one character at a time, for readers convience and quick use. Also, I suggest introducing them before the summary to get reader familar with them before. MermaiddolphinOGT (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 00:35, 16 February 2013 (UTC)