Talk:The Knickerbocker Hotel/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Move the short description to the top of the article.
 * Also move the "use mdy dates" note below "distinguish".
 * Add a comma after "major renovations in 1980".
 * Add a comma after "another renovation in 2001".
 * I think a hyphen should go between "similar looking".
 * "entrance which takes" "entrance that takes"
 * "converted an office building" "converted into an office building"
 * "laundry facility was also" "laundry facility were also"
 * Remove the hyphen between "safe-deposit".
 * "developed with commercial purposes" - shouldn't this be "for commercial purposes"?
 * Check for citation ordering
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Is the New York Post reference necessary if the statement is already covered? (WP:NYPOST)
 * PR Newswire is marked as unreliable (WP:PRNEWSWIRE) for lack of editorial oversight.
 * Wikilink David W. Dunlap, Christopher Gray, Florence Fabricant, and Meyer Berger.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 17:22, 2 July 2021 (UTC)