Talk:The Ladies of Grace Adieu and Other Stories/GA1

GA Review
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Criterion 1: well-written
Well-written throughout. I have only one comment, and it's a nit-picky one: in opening the article, my eye happened to fall on the phrase "As Hoyle expands", and it took me a minute to figure this out. That's mostly my own fault, and I see that you are trying to avoid saying "As Hoyle explains" over and over (and of course "According to Hoyle" doesn't sound right either), but if another synonym could be found, I think that would be nice. Could you say, "As Hoyle points out" or "argues" or something like that?
 * Done! Awadewit (talk) 22:42, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Criterion 2: factually accurate and verifiable
Excellent here.

Criterion 3: broad in its coverage
Appears not only broad but exhaustive.

Criterion 4: neutral
Unbiased; presents multiple POVs throughout.

Criterion 5: stable
Stable.

Criterion 6: illustrated, if possible, by images
Great here - of course!

Verdict
Easily a Good Article. Ricardiana (talk) 05:17, 22 May 2009 (UTC)