Talk:The Last Coyote

Proofread
The plot synopsis is in need of a good proofread. As well as basic spelling ("briefcase", not "breifcase", etc) and basic grammar ("mother's", not "mothers", etc) there seem to be a lot of different character names. Check all their names - there are some "Johnaton"s, "Johnathan"s, "Jonathen"s, "Mittell"s, and "bosch"s. Maybe run it through Word or something else with a spellchecker. — 97198 (talk) 11:06, 27 August 2008 (UTC)