Talk:The Last Voyage of the Starship Enterprise/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Maile66 (talk · contribs) 21:57, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * Comment - GA is not dependent upon this, but under the Themes section, there is repetitiveness in wording: Mother Jones the Enterprise was defeated not by its traditional enemies such as the Klingons but by a stupid NBC executive and Jon Corey not Khan Noonien Singh or the Klingons that defeated the Enterprise but an enemy much more powerful — the NBC executives appearing one paragraph after the other as it does. Might want to reword one or the other.
 * AGF on offline sourcing. I also ran Earwig, which showed no issues of concern, except for the place where it compared the article with itself as a copy.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Cites reliable sources, where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused (see summary style):
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * In fact, this article survived AFD on 7 October 2015, and on 8 October Cirt began a major improvement of the article. Cirt has been the primary editor since then.
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * The image of John Belushi as Kirk is Fair Use. All others are licensed on Commons.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work. — Maile (talk) 22:18, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much,, most appreciated ! &mdash; Cirt (talk) 04:11, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * The image of John Belushi as Kirk is Fair Use. All others are licensed on Commons.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work. — Maile (talk) 22:18, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much,, most appreciated ! &mdash; Cirt (talk) 04:11, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much,, most appreciated ! &mdash; Cirt (talk) 04:11, 22 October 2015 (UTC)