Talk:The Last of Us: Left Behind/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GamerPro64 (talk · contribs)

Gonna stake my claim on reviewing this article. Feedback coming soon. GamerPro64 22:34, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Review
-Throughout the game, players control Ellie; Riley is controlled by the artificial intelligence.[3] I checked its citation and I didn't see that mentioned in it. -There, she treats his open wound, and takes Joel away from the mall to find a hideout for the coming Winter. I'm not sure if "There" should be in the sentence.
 * Gameplay
 * Plot

-A random question since I've never played The Last of Us. Does the game just ends with Ellie and Riley embracing each other? Just a weird way to end the plot overall. GamerPro64 21:41, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments so far, ! I'd like to answer some of your concerns:
 * Even though I know that Riley is definitely controlled by the artificial intelligence, you are correct when you say that the citation does not mention it; I've removed this fact.
 * Spoiler alert: the game ends with Ellie and Riley discussing what they should do. Riley then gets up and walks out of frame, and the game ends on a shot of Ellie. You can watch it here.
 * Let me know if you have any other concerns. Thanks! -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 00:51, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * , it seems as though the Plot section doesn't have any references. Just telling you just in case you miss it. -- Anar  chyte   02:51, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * References for plot sections aren't required but is Rhain wants to that can work. GamerPro64  03:02, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I just added one, in the same fashion as Grand Theft Auto V; I know they're not required, but there's no harm in having it there. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 03:06, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

-I think you should look at the archived sources to your citations. I was checking the GameSpot review and I think it sent me to a clip from Eddie Murphy's "Raw" comedy special. . GamerPro64 19:31, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Archive Links
 * This doesn't make any sense to me. Take a look at all of the archived sources to GameSpot references (9, 16, 27, 31); they all seem to redirect to the same clip. It looks like someone over at GameSpot might have made this happen, and it's confusing me. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 23:44, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * GameSpot's sister site, Giant Bomb, appears to do the same thing. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 23:49, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
 * By any chance does this effect other links to websites by CBS Interactive with WebCite? GamerPro64  01:01, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I was considering that, but GameRankings and Metacritic are unaffected. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 01:03, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
 * If there's no way for the archive links to be fixed, we might have to resort to Archive.org. GamerPro64  05:03, 27 June 2015 (UTC)
 * If no clear solution arises by the time the rest of this review is completed, I'll go through and change the applicable links. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 05:05, 27 June 2015 (UTC)

So besides the archive links issue, which doesn't effect GA criteria, I believe this article meets requirements to become a Good Article. If you do not agree with this decision, you can take the article to WP:GAR for reassessment. Cheers. GamerPro64 01:05, 28 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Conclusion
 * Thanks for the review! Hopefully, we'll find a solution for the archive links issue soon. If not, I'll be sure to come back and replace all of the links in a few weeks. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me) 01:08, 28 June 2015 (UTC)