Talk:The Leader (web series)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
 * Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
 * Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * Again, change "intellectual" per WP:NPOV.
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
 * Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "with his death".
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * "merchandisesuch" "merchandise such"
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
 * True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Broadcast

 * "social-media" "social media"
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "more-serious" "more serious"
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
 * No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "surplus value" "surplus-value"
 * Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "boils".
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
 * ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.

Reception

 * In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
 * Wow, nice catch. Thanks. ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
 * Thanks again. ✅ Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)