Talk:The Legend of Korra/GA1

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Reviewer: Ob tund  (talk · contribs) 18:24, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

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 * I disagree with the assessment at 3b that the ratings subsection is unneeded. Ratings are an important aspect of a TV show and belong into the main article. I've reinserted the respective section, if not the graphic. I also don't think that the summary coverage of the book 1 plot needs to go into any more detail, as is suggested for 3a.  Sandstein   21:09, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * As regards 5, there are unclosed RfCs on the talk page regarding article organization.  Sandstein   21:10, 22 August 2012 (UTC)


 * I'm ambivalent about the ratings section, so whatever you guys decide. But for the RFCs, the episode list doesn't concern this article and the italics RFC is pretty much closed (the only editor opposing italics is Light2Shadow). Only major pending change in the article is possible reversion of the characters section, which I do not see happening unless somebody comes up with an out-of-universe character list (not the previous crap that was in the article). Finally, as for the other changes (prose, etc.), I'll work on that ASAP. — Parent5446 ☯ ([ msg] email) 23:43, 22 August 2012 (UTC)


 * What you did about 3b is fine. 3a is missing vital information on how the show starts. That needs to be there. If the RFCs are not taken care of, the article may be defined as unstable so get them done ASAP. Ob tund Talk 01:30, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm going to work on 3a later today (shouldn't be more than a sentence or two). — Parent5446 ☯ ([ msg] email) 15:59, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, just say something like tenzin came to the southern water tribe and left and then korra snuck on a boat and went to republic city, and then see meet Beifong. Ob tund Talk 19:21, 24 August 2012 (UTC)


 * OK, added that and also added the brief intro to the characters section. Hopefully things are OK now. — Parent5446 ☯ ([ msg] email) 03:23, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

Fixed a number of the prose issues. I didn't fix 4, 12, and 13 because they are correct in their current form (expln: would create a fragmented verb clause; both ambitious and charismatic are adj. of politician, and so the article belongs to the entire phrase; the noun of the sentence is "elements", which is plural). Still have to work on 7. — Parent5446 ☯ ([ msg] email) 00:02, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 4. It says, "Bending is carried out using spiritual and physical exercises, portrayed in the series as similar to Chinese and other Asian martial arts." it should be "Bending is carried out using spiritual and physical exercises, which are portrayed in the series as similar to Chinese and other Asian martial arts." This is my error as I wrote my comment incorrectly. I have updated the above to comply. Ob tund Talk 01:36, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Ah, OK. Just fixed in the article. — Parent5446 ☯ ([ msg] email) 15:59, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Comment:The insertion of "which are" is not wrong, but, Obtund, it is not necessary. It was a perfectly correct participial phrase. --Stfg (talk) 08:12, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 12. ✅ - Ob tund Talk 01:40, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
 * 13. ✅ - My error. Ob tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 02:53, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

Did you ever forget to fail the article when the 3-day time limit's up? 71.142.234.34 (talk) 23:20, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No I did not, the edits were being taken care of, and there were some issues to be discussed. <em style="font-family:Courier;color:green">Ob <em style="font-family:Courier;color:#009ACD">tund <em style="font-family:Courier">Talk 23:37, 24 August 2012 (UTC)