Talk:The Life (Fifth Harmony song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:12, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * Please use "second" instead of "sophomore"
 * the album's first → the record's first (alternation)
 * and was initially made available on streaming services such as Spotify and digital download sites like iTunes. → Too much info for the lead; remove
 * with Hilbert handling → comma before "with"
 * Musically, the song is an electronic dance song featuring elements of tropical house and Eurodance. → Musically, the recording is of the electronic dance genre, featuring...
 * Link "Critical" to Music journalism
 * and independence with the group → comma before "with"
 * peaking at number 97 and 44 respectively → peaking at numbers 97 and 44, respectively
 * chart complement → component chart

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and release

 * Unlink "Fifth Harmony"
 * teased the song for the first time → teased "The Life" for the first time
 * in which she revealed → in which she also revealed
 * collaborators present in the album. → fcollaborators on the album
 * behind the track saying that it → comma before "saying"
 * She goes on to say that → She went on explaining
 * Unlink "Tinashe" the second time
 * and Lukas Hilbert with Hilbert → comma before "with"
 * Serbian Ghenea → His name is "Serban"
 * It was released → Say "The Life was released" here for alternation
 * on March 24, 2016.[5] and serviced → on March 24, 2016,[5] and serviced
 * the song was also made available on Google Play.[7] → you can remove that, as iTunes suffices

Composition

 * of self-love and lifestyle with Peter Meister → comma before "with"
 * Link "auto-tuned" to Auto-Tune
 * Sample > of "The Life". An electronic dance song with → of "The Life", an electronic...

Critical reception

 * You should add a topic sentence to the section, such as: Upon its release, "The Life" was met with positive reviews from music critics
 * noting the song's use of "upbeat → noting its use of "upbeat (alternation)
 * Dee Lockett thought the song → say "The Life" here for alternation
 * at number one for their top 10 → at number one on their top 10
 * calling the song an "urban bop → calling it...
 * They also called it → They also labelled it (alternation)
 * noted the song features a "increasingly frantic beat" → noted "The Life" features
 * like Madison III → echoing the though of Madison III
 * note similar "Danity Kane → noted similar...
 * vibes" in the song, and highlighted the "production and execution" of the song: two times "song" in the same sentence :(
 * He noted the more relaxing atmosphere in this song → He also noted the more relaxing atmosphere in the recording
 * Simon Vozick-Levinson sais the song → "...says..."
 * environment in the song → ...in "The Life" (alternation)
 * not "have that “pass it off to the next singer” feel" → not that "have that 'pass it off to the next singer' feel"
 * calling the song a "serious banger" → calling the recording...
 * Image > Unlink "girl group" and remove comma

Credits and personnel

 * Unlink "liner notes" + say "Credits adapted from the liner notes of 7/27."
 * Say "composer" instead of "writer"

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 23.1% is acceptable

Media

 * Images and sample seem stable ;)

Outcome

 * There's a little work to de before I can pass this to GA status. I put this article for 7 days. Best of luck with editing!! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:09, 4 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Just finished including your suggestions into the article. Thank you for picking it up for a GA review. De88 (talk) 09:57, 9 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:16, 9 September 2017 (UTC)