Talk:The Lightning Thief/GA2

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

In depth review
When an item has been adressed, I will check mark the item.
 * I added as it will make it easier for me to fix them. You can possibly add . ;)  Pmlineditor    Talk  08:58, 1 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Talk about the next book in the article.
 * Pmlineditor   Talk  11:03, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

Prose

 * It is the first book in the Percy Jackson & The Olympians series, and chronicles the adventures of twelve year old Percy Jackson, who discovers he is a demigod, the son of a mortal woman and the Greek god Poseidon.
 * Wouldn't it better to say : It is the first book in the Percy Jackson & The Olympians series, which are chronicles of the adventures of twelve year old Percy Jackson, who discovers he is a demigod, the son of a mortal woman and the Greek god Poseidon.


 * The book is commonly classified as young-adult fiction,
 * By whom?


 * The book is often praised for its feel of realism and for how believable each character is.
 * By whom?


 * However, at the end of the book, he betrays Percy and leaves him half dead; revealing that he works for the Titan Kronos.
 * Rather than giving the position of the book away, why not say :However, he later betrays Percy [...] for the Titan Kronos.

MOS

 * The article needs more Wikilinks (such as realism, poseidon)
 * Pmlineditor   Talk  07:49, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * New information that is presented in infobox or lead must be sourced.
 * Avoid weasel words
 * (the sentence about the audiobook you mentioned in IRC) Pmlineditor    Talk  07:49, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * There is a section with only three sentences.
 * Expanded a bit. Pmlineditor    Talk  10:21, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Expanded to double the size. Really, not much info about it. Pmlineditor    Talk  11:45, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Expanded to double the size. Really, not much info about it. Pmlineditor    Talk  11:45, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

Images

 * Add movie logo image
 * Pmlineditor   Talk  07:51, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Perhaps change the caption for the image of author to something other than quote?
 * Pmlineditor   Talk  08:14, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

Links
The article has a few problems. I am keeping it on hold for seven days, so that the problems can be fixed. Warrior 4321  19:13, 31 August 2009 (UTC)
 * These articles are disambiguation pages:
 * Artemis Fowl
 * Empire State
 * Kronos
 * Percy Jackson
 * Realism
 * Reference 19 is dead.
 * Used cached version from Google. Pmlineditor    Talk  08:15, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Realism
 * Reference 19 is dead.
 * Used cached version from Google. Pmlineditor    Talk  08:15, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Reference 19 is dead.
 * Used cached version from Google. Pmlineditor    Talk  08:15, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

After all the fixes completed here, and fixes which were asked on IRC, this article is ready for promotion! { Warrior  4321  16:46, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks to you and Shimgray for the reviews and the help. { Pmlineditor    Talk  17:41, 1 September 2009 (UTC)