Talk:The List (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Review
I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.

As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.


 * Lead
 * Good
 * Plot
 * Good
 * Reception
 * Good
 * References
 * Good

Verdict
— Hahc 21  04:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)