Talk:The Litigators/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ebe123 (talk · contribs) 15:17, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * The last sentence of the first paragraph should have a reference.
 * The entire 2nd paragraph needs references.
 * I have decided to go with the uncited WP:LEAD format, where all content is cited in the main body and summarized in the LEAD without citation there.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:58, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Fine.  Ebe 123  → report on my contribs. 16:11, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Background
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Publication
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Plot summary

 * How about just "Plot" for the section?
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:00, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I think that the plot should be cleaned out, as it's very long.
 * Further specific feedback requested. P.S. when Peer review/The Litigators/archive1 noted that the plot was deficient, I expanded it.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:00, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I saw that, and considering the number of pages and other users, it's fine.  Ebe 123  → report on my contribs. 16:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

List of characters
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Critical review
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Commercial success
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Comments

 * On hold now (7 days).
 * No dead links