Talk:The Loneliness of the Crocodile

Sentence needs clarification
In this present version under Plot is the sentence "Günther, a young man, the son of a butcher who received a severe education..." - which requires clarification: As my knowledge of German is only rudimentary, I ask input from those better equipped to do the rewrite. -- Deborahjay (talk) 20:29, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "severe education - is the intention perhaps "strict upbringing"? Or harsh?
 * Who received the aforesaid education: Günther or his father (the butcher)? The present lack of a comma after "butcher" indicates the latter.
 * I tried, please check. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:28, 14 December 2018 (UTC)