Talk:The Louvre (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:16, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * for her sophomore album → According to Wikipedia's Manual of Style, "sophomore" shouldn't be used here; use "second" here
 * indie rock and ambient music → Links to those genres
 * It derives its name from the Louvre → Its name derives from the Louvre
 * talk about Lorde's honest, lightly-manic analysis of a newly-sparked romance → this info should be in the article's body, so a ref wouldn't be needed here
 * landing in several year-end lists → with it landing in several year-end lists
 * "Born to Run" → add release year in brackets afterwards
 * The track centers around themes of obsession and sacrifice as it continues the narrative established in the previous song, "Homemade Dynamite". → This should be in the first paragraph; I can't find this info in the article's body!
 * and it is on the set list of her ongoing Melodrama World Tour (2017–2018). → It is currently part of the set list of her...

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Recording and composition

 * "The Louvre" at three different → "The Louvre" in three different
 * additional production to the song → replace "song" with "track" here to avoid repeating yourself
 * You should cite the album's liner notes at the end of the first paragraph
 * "The Louvre" is described as a song about the early → "The Louvre" revolves with the early
 * describe it as a "wide-eyed, heart-skippy pop" song → described it as a "wide-eyed, heart-skippy pop" track
 * The track reveals the singer's → Its lyrics also reveal the singer's
 * Picture > Don't know what "(Richelieu wing pictured)" should mean
 * Everything else seems on point

Critical reception

 * In a review roundup for The Fader → comma after "The Fader"
 * to the The Cure → to the work of The Cure
 * Stereogum placed the song as number 13 → Stereogum placed the recording at number 13
 * but the song also served as a reminder → ,with the song serving as a reminder
 * ranked the song at number 42 in its year-end list → ranked the track at number 42 in his year-end list
 * Spin placed the song at number 9 on its year-end list → In Spin's year-end list, "The Louvre" was ranked at number nine
 * calling the internal monologue → with the publication calling...

Live performances

 * The box "titled back-and-forth above [the singer's] head." → This sentence doesn't make any sense
 * giving the full performance a → giving it a (to avoid repeating yourself)
 * a departure from the black chiffon → "a departure from" is not the right wording here

Credits and personnel

 * Flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 18.7% is very good!

Media

 * Images seems stable

Outcome

 * Apart from a few issues in the lead, the article seems to be in a very good shape. I've put it for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:58, 24 December 2017 (UTC)


 * I just fixed the article using all your feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing this. Had no idea someone would pick it up so soon! De88 (talk) 15:55, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)