Talk:The Love Train/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:16, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

This weekend. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:16, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking this on. I’ll address everything quickly!—NØ 15:38, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Needs new alt, I mean "A hot pink drawing of a locomotive". Remove "hot pink", that's no color
 * No genres?
 * Yeah, sorry. It's obviously pop but no reviews state that.
 * Edit: Actually AllMusic states "it's heavy on [...] persistent dance-pop that [doesn't] quite fit into the trends of the late 2010s". Is that good enough to add Dance-pop as a genre to the infobox?
 * Yes, please add it

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Lead

 * produced songs for the EP → sounds weird
 * I can't think of a better way to write it currently.
 * All of the material on the EP was produced by...
 * Remove the songwriters, its not vital to the Lead


 * and inspired by → as they were inspired by...
 * Partially ✅, but I tried to frame it better.

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 * Top Current Albums → remove it along with its peak
 * Trainor promoted it with several music videos. → Trainor promoted it with several music videos for the other songs on the EP.
 * Add the genre now to the lead.
 * "All the Ways" was serviced to hot adult contemporary radio as a single on February 11, 2019. → "All the Ways" was released as a single on February 11, 2019.

Background and composition
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 * The opener → The opener and lead single,

Promotion

 * You could point out it was one per day during a week.
 * One day later, the music video for "Good Mornin'" → One the following day, the music video for "Good Mornin'"
 * Add the directors for each video
 * The directors for all the videos were already there, except "I'm Down" which is a compilation of movie clips and there's no director stated in the description.


 * No other source than Youtube?
 * Yup, no secondary source covered the "I'm Down" video.

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Single

 * Let's merge this section with the one below, since this one is too small.
 * Makes more sense to merge it with "Promotion" imo, since singles are released to promote a record.

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Critical reception

 * Rename it to reception (see above why)
 * Idolator, BroadwayWorld, Radio.com → not italic
 * "celebration of romance coming from a singer who had reason to extol the virtues of love" → use your own words more often
 * Sorry lol, I wasn't the one who originally added this bit. Rephrased :P

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 * Single and commercial performance of the album should be in the first paragraph, reviews on the second.

Commercial performance
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 * Remove Top Current Albums (see below the reason)
 * Should be included in the section above as well.

Track listing

 * Fine
 * Glad to hear that.

Credits and personnel
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 * Use

Charts

 * I have some doubts regarding Top Current Albums as it is the same chart as Top Album Sales, but with catalog titles removed. Remove the former.
 * WP:USCHARTS doesn't seem to state anything about this, so I'll take your word and remove it.
 * I had a conversation with other user and we seem to share the same opinion. I looked there first, that's why I stated the above, before telling you to remove it.

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Release history
No italic on BigFM and Today ✅
 * Source?

Overall
On hold for a week. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:29, 18 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Made most of the changes with a few exceptions which I noted above.--NØ 08:48, 19 July 2019 (UTC)

I add some little fixes, here and there. Take a look a them. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:02, 19 July 2019 (UTC)
 * , I went ahead and made the suggested changes. I agree with all of them.—NØ 16:21, 19 July 2019 (UTC)