Talk:The Majestic (apartment building)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 19:32, 28 August 2022 (UTC)

A handful of copy tweaks and alt text. Given that it's been a while, a fresh set of eyes could find more. 7-day hold to. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:34, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

History

 * Maybe this belongs in the next paragraph?
 * The New York Majestic Corporation took over the building in 1937. That November, the Mutual Life Insurance Company of New York loaned $2.5 million to the New York Majestic Corporation. Consider reflow to combine.
 * Some tenants opposed the conversion and sued in the New York Supreme Court in an attempt to halt the conversion; maybe "halt it".

Notable people

 * (later called the Genovese crime family) Add comma after this parenthetical.

Source spot checks
I randomly chose 9 refs for checks:
 * 24 ✅ Chanin/Delamarre, NPS report
 * 27 ✅ Emporis listing of 31 floors
 * 63 ✅ "Extending their activities to Manhattan in 1924..."
 * 66 Book source without preview.
 * 82 Do not have access in ProQuest, though citation is correct for this article.
 * 86 Same.
 * 103 Same.
 * 106 ✅ Permission for tenants to replace windows.
 * 114 Do not have access in ProQuest, though headline would seemingly corroborate.

Other items

 * Images are appropriately licensed but need alt text.
 * Earwig only catches unavoidable formulations, the included quotes, and some proper nouns.
 * References are archived.
 * @Sammi Brie, thanks for the review. I have now fixed all of these issues. – Epicgenius (talk) 13:47, 29 August 2022 (UTC)