Talk:The Man in the Moon Stayed Up Too Late/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Artem.G (talk · contribs) 06:19, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey Chiswick Chap, I will review this nice article. I'm new to GA assessment, but I'll do my best. Artem.G (talk) 06:19, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * That's very good of you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:22, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

Few comments/question:
 * "In The Prancing Pony Inn at Bree, Frodo Baggins jumps on a table and recites "a ridiculous song" supposedly invented by his cousin Bilbo." - shouldn't it be uncle Bilbo? (In Context section, the same in Performance versus folklore transmission)
 * Cousin is definitely correct; the "uncle" thing is a loose phrase, often used. See Frodo Baggins; it's based on Appendix C of The Lord of the Rings.
 * You are right, thanks for clarification.


 * "Scholars have noted that the light-hearted poem fits into a reworking by Tolkien of the Man in the Moon tradition" - shouldn't the Man in the Moon be in quotation marks? (in lead section, the same in Multi-layered tradition)
 * Done.


 * The article mentions the original Hey Diddle Diddle, so maybe it would be useful to include a short section about this rhyme, with quotation of the first stanza and a short history?
 * Done.


 * Thank you very much. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:21, 2 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Thanks for quick fixes! As far as I see, everything is good - article's well-written, cite sources, has no edit wars, has no copyright violation (as far as I check), and covers the topic; and so IMO it is GA. Congrats!