Talk:The Marriage (video game)

Drive-by
some drive-by rhetorical suggestions:
 * almost all of the quotes can be paraphrased; has a chance of making the original expressions less obtuse in the process
 * instead of introducing a random reviewer's name, would help to know why they're being mentioned (a scholar? a reviewer? which publication?) if it isn't better to remove altogether (Copyediting reception sections has good advice too)
 * should the URLs have archive links? iabot can set that up for ya
 * lede should be expanded for GA: what's the game about? was there any reviewer consensus?
 * there are a bunch of sources in use that I wouldn't consider high-quality prima facie—can they be replaced?

(not watching, please )  czar  21:43, 9 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks. For posterity, I've replied here: Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Video_games. &mdash; Rhododendrites  talk \\ 06:55, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Responding to the things that didn't come up in the other thread:
 * I don't typically create archive links unless something is likely to go missing in the short term. My presumption is that the bots wind up getting to them eventually?
 * Which sources are the poorer ones? There are a couple for which the site isn't great but the author is a good one to have, like Rohrer writing on indiegames or arthouse games (though thet latter is his own website). There are a couple conference proceedings and theses, which aren't ideal, but I imagine those aren't the ones you're talking about. &mdash; Rhododendrites  talk \\ 06:59, 11 December 2018 (UTC)