Talk:The Monster Ball Tour/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 19 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * ...while elements of the canceled tour with West still included in some parts. → Put "were" between "West" and "still"
 * From 2010 and onwards, the revamped shows had a New York theme... → Remove "and" from this phrase
 * Each of them featured Gaga in new outfits, singing songs related to the concept of the segment, and was followed by a video interlude. → Replace "and was" with "as they were"
 * Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"
 * Each of them featured Gaga in new outfits, singing songs related to the concept of the segment, and was followed by a video interlude. → Replace "and was" with "as they were"
 * Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"
 * Commentators commended Gaga's singing abilities, theatricality of the show, and sense of style and fashion. → Add "her" between "and" and "sense"

Background

 * ...West made a public statement that he would take temporary leave from his recording career due to the media and public reaction towards his outburst during Taylor Swift's acceptance speech... → There is no source listed saying that West "would take temporary leave" from touring because of this
 * Gaga addressed the situation at Billboard's annual Women in Music luncheon, where she cited creative differences as the reason for the tour's cancellation. → No source to support this
 * Gaga addressed the situation at Billboard's annual Women in Music luncheon, where she cited creative differences as the reason for the tour's cancellation. → No source to support this

Development

 * The revamp of the tour were planned from the arena shows... → Change "were" to "was"

Concert synopsis

 * ...she wore bondage inspired black leather dress with guns... → Put "a" between "wore" and "bondage"

Critical response

 * No issues

Commercial reception

 * Additional shows were announced, and Semi Precious Weapons will continue on the road with Gaga until the Monster Ball ends. → Change to past tense

Broadcast and recordings

 * The special has been nominated for five honors at the upcoming 63rd Primetime Emmy Awards:... → Update this information

Opening acts

 * No issues

Setlist

 * No issues

Tour dates

 * No issues

Personnel

 * No issues