Talk:The Motto (Tiësto and Ava Max song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:01, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

I will go for this just after your previous effort passed! --K. Peake 09:01, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "while produced by Tiësto and" → "while produced by the DJ and" to avoid overusage of his name
 * "as well as the vocal delivery of the singer." → "and the vocal delivery of Max."
 * "and reached the top five on rankings" either mention the number of countries it reached the top five or top 10 in, then add ones these included
 * For both gold and platinum certifications, add the number of countries each were in and list a few examples
 * "and the UK" → "and the United Kingdom"
 * "and the US." → "and the United States."
 * "for "The Motto" premiered" → "for the song premiered"

Background and composition

 * "Few days prior to" → "A few days prior to"
 * "depth to ['the song']," while" → "depth to ['the song']", while"
 * ""The Motto" is a" → "Musically, "The Motto" is a"
 * Why is [7] at the end of the above sentence when it offers no mention of eurodance?

Critical reception

 * "widely received critical acclaim" → "was met with widespread critical acclaim"
 * BroadwayWorld should not be italicised
 * "and the party begins again."" → "and the party begins again!"" per the source
 * "signature dance soundscape."" → "signature dance soundscape"." per MOS:QUOTE; fix the repeated occurrences of these issues throughout
 * Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised

Commercial performance

 * "as Tiësto's sixth and" → "standing as Tiësto's sixth and"
 * Mention the Dance/Mix Show Airplay chart since you have written that in the lead
 * "more than 1,000,000 copies" → "more than 1,000,000 equivalent copies" because that is what the certification actually is
 * "the song reached number 6" → "the song reached number 6 on"
 * Remove pipe on Canada Hot AC, as that is the same sub-section the previous term leads to
 * "from Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)" → "from the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)"
 * "and number 6 in on" → "and number 6 on" also, I would recommend moving the United Kingdom to being after its singles chart so the sentence doesn't imply Ireland is part of the country
 * "from British Phonographic Industry (BPI)" → "from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI)"
 * Wouldn't it be better to use the plural for the certifications?

Music video

 * Img looks good!
 * "leaving out a hotel party" are you sure this is correct grammatically?
 * "and causing all the guests to" → "and this causes all the guests to"
 * "as a nod to the" → "a reference to the"

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Why is Czech Republic radio chart included too when the single one is there?
 * All Czech charts are included in almost every music article, as well as the Hungarian ones. Iaof2017 (talk) 16:20, 7 January 2023 (UTC)

Monthly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this took as long as I thought! --K. Peake 12:16, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi again, I have everything addressed and thank you for the review and your continous work throughout Wikipedia. Iaof2017 (talk) 16:25, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, good job and you have implemented everything! --K. Peake 10:57, 8 January 2023 (UTC)