Talk:The Myst Reader/GA1

GA Review
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 * Link "September 1, 2004[1]" in the infobox if dates are to be linked in this article.
 * "novels; The" &rarr; "novels: The"
 * "centers of the family" &rarr; "centers around the family"
 * "the Myst franchise, and" &rarr; "the Myst franchise, and"
 * "Myst co-creators Rand and Robyn Miller were always creating their own worlds and stories as young children." &rarr; "Myst co-creators Rand and Robyn Miller often created fictional worlds and stories as young children." – because I don't think they literally did it "all the time" (always), and to specify that they are fictional
 * A few more minor prose issues in the article. The above was from the beginning; I also found "Reception to the Myst novels have been mixed." – "reception" is singular, so "have" should be "has".

Gary King ( talk ) 22:48, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
 * All the above fixed. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 00:41, 5 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Still some more. Probably needs another run through :) For instance:


 * "Marrim, will be released on a date. A preview" – what date?
 * "Also giving the novel a mediocre score was Albert Kim of Entertainment Weekly," – probably would be better if it was active; "Albert Kim of Entertainment Weekly also gave the novel a mediocre score,"
 * "After Writing new Ages, " – "After writing new Ages, "?

Gary King ( talk ) 00:47, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * You don't have to go right through, I'll give it a copyedit and then leave you a note to save your time. Just leaving notes to meself :) Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 00:48, 5 July 2008 (UTC)


 * "Atrus. Atrus is raised" &rarr; "Atrus. He is raised"
 * "Age, Inception because" &rarr; "Age, Inception, because"
 * I think that's all I could find. Otherwise, it's pretty good – especially considering half of this article is like a story book :p

Gary King ( talk ) 17:42, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed the last batch. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 18:17, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

This article now meets the Good Article criteria and has therefore been passed. Congratulations! Gary King ( talk ) 18:28, 5 July 2008 (UTC)