Talk:The New Cup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:56, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:56, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * Not sure if United States needs to be linked; seems overly general, but if you want to keep it I'm not against it.
 * The redlink in the infobox isn't necessarily and can be removed.
 * Add the overall episode number to the lead.
 * Bobin and Sarkies don't have to be linked in the production section, since they are in the lead and infobox.
 * "In the scene when Jemaine and then Bret ask" rm then; interrupts sentence flow
 * "Jemaine wears a leather cowboy waistcoat and cowboy shoes. Finally during the credits, he wears a cowboy hat." reword to combine into one sentence. Maybe something like "a leather cowboy waistcoat and cowboy shows, and wears a cowboy hat during the credits."

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:10, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Wizardman, I have found another issue:


 * Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox

Thanks, TBrandley 18:06, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe I have addressed all the concerns raised. Thank you for the review!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:11, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article now passes as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)