Talk:The New Dinosaurs/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 22:44, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

On my list. Give me a few days. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:44, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

I have done a little copy editing, which you will want to check.


 * Unlink "Earth"
 * Optionally link "alternate Earth" to Parallel universes in fiction.
 * "to dinosaurs that were eventually discovered" This is a little clumsy. Maybe 'to dinosaurs that were discovered after the book's publication or similar?
 * "entirely convergent with real modern day animals" "real" seems unnecessary; as opposed to unreal modern day animals? I would stick with "actual".

I feel guilty that I cannot suggest more improvements. This is one of the best GANs I have assessed. Bravo! Gog the Mild (talk) 19:29, 1 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the praise! I've added the improvements you suggested :) Ichthyovenator (talk) 20:19, 1 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Excellent work. Promoting. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:24, 1 September 2019 (UTC)