Talk:The Nurturing Network

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Noticing the recommendation of one editor that the style of writing in this article was too much like an advertisement, the group of editors that I collaborate with in strengthening the Wikipedia articles of non-profits with smaller staffs consulted on this article and have offered our collective suggestions for a more NPOV. In our view, this article is documented very thoroughly and the changes we have offered meet the requirement for encyclopedic style. With this in mind, we would encourage the editor who raised this issue to make a review and promptly remove the warning banner. On the outside chance, that the article still seems promotional, please be specific about your concerns. Thank you.Ukealong (talk) 19:41, 29 July 2011 (UTC)