Talk:The Old Man and the "C" Student/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  R uby2010   comment!  15:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Indicate 6.9 million viewers watched the episode in the lead (some might not understand the Nielsen rating)
 * Wikilink Milhouse and Martin
 * Why does Homer's hatred of Bart cause him to fail miserably? It's been a while since I saw this episode
 * Abe -> Grampa (change?)
 * Last three sentences in cultural ref section need citations
 * Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations
 * Wikilink ref publishers (Pioneer Press etc)

Just make the above fixes and the article will be good to go!
 * Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:37, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Pass for GA  R uby2010   comment!  18:28, 27 June 2011 (UTC)