Talk:The One (Tamar Braxton song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 01:02, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "Critical response to "The One" was positive; some critics praised" - I think this would work better without the semicolon, as in just "Critical response to "The One" was positive, with some critics praising ..." - but up to you
 * I have received a note in the past to avoid the "with" construction, but I made the revision. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * In the 'Background and composition' section you mention that it was her second single off the album. Do you think it is worth mentioning what the lead single was in the prose? And perhaps a single fact about it, like that it was Grammy nominated? I note the lead single is mentioned/linked in the reception section, but I would have thought it should have been introduced earlier.
 * I do not believe that it is necessary. This article is about this particular song. If the reader wants to know more about the other singles, then they can click on the link to the album. The first single and the third single can also be located in the infobox. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "that best represented the summer 2013," - this doesn't seem right grammar wise. Should it be "the summer of 2013"?
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "number two and 34 on the Adult R&B Songs and the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs charts" - I'd add "respectively" to the end of this sentence, after a comma.
 * Added. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Adult R&B Airplay just redirects to Adult R&B Songs, which is already wikilinked in the same section.
 * Removed the link. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "A preview was shown during the reality television series Braxton Family Values" - I'd add a comma and quick description of what the show is for people completely unfamiliar with it. Same issue later with 'Tamar & Vince'.
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

Looks really good. Looking forward to passing this once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 01:02, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review! I believe that I have addressed everything. Have a wonderful start to your week. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Happy to pass this now. :) Freikorp (talk) 02:35, 11 June 2018 (UTC)