Talk:The One After the Superbowl/GA1

GA Review
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Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. Ah, I remember this episode... Anyways, check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for a guideline on how I'll be setting this up. Let's get started!  The Flash  {talk} 02:14, 25 September 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Guest stars in the episode include[...]" -> everybody you mention appear to be all the people who guest star, so you shouldn't say "include."
 * First paragraph is out of place. "Guest stars in the episode[...]" should be moved after "The network's decision to air the episode directly[...]" to fix it.
 * "[...]written by Michael Borkow, and the second[...]" -> "Borkow and the"
 * ✅ All done.

Plot summary

 * "[...]a monkey that reminds him of Marcel on a beer commercial[...]" -> huh? Give context to the reader by mentioning who Marcel is.
 * Wikilink "elementary school"
 * Wikilink "panties"
 * "[...]meet the movie's star Jean-Claude Van Damme" -> what movie?
 * The movie that Marcel stars in. The whole paragraph is about that movie.
 * Oh, they never mention the name of the movie?  The Flash  {talk} 19:18, 25 September 2009 (UTC)
 * No, I don't think so.  The left orium  19:28, 25 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Okay then, ✅ check.  The Flash  {talk} 21:03, 25 September 2009 (UTC)
 * "[...]reunites with Marcel, and Joey lands[...]" -> "Marcel and Joey"
 * ✅ All done.

Production

 * "Shields' said she was asked to appear on the show[...]" -> "when she was asked"
 * "[...]Perry at the time,[11][12][13][14] and an audience[...]" -> "time and and"
 * ✅ All done.

Reception

 * "[...]a 47 percent audience share[...]" -> you should explain what this means to non-cable-rating-savvy readers (like myself, lol :P)
 * Wikilinked.
 * "[...]made him "nauseous", and commented[...]" -> ""nauseous" and commented"
 * ✅ All done.
 * Found some more:
 * Nielsen Rating is a double redirect.
 * File:Jean-Claude Van Damme June 2, 2007.jpg would be better replaced with File:Van Damme, Jean Claude (USAF).jpg
 * Wikilink to DVD Talk in both the text and ref 30.
 * ✅ All done.

Images

 * Both are tagged properly - no complaints here.

Final say

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thanks for getting to all those issues, because I've gone ahead and passed this article! :)  The Flash  {talk} 02:14, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review! :)  The left orium  08:41, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thanks for getting to all those issues, because I've gone ahead and passed this article! :)  The Flash  {talk} 02:14, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review! :)  The left orium  08:41, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review! :)  The left orium  08:41, 26 September 2009 (UTC)