Talk:The One Percent Doctrine

Prose
This is a non-fiction book, but the article appears to be written as a novel or fictional work. I can't put my finger on what to change, but I think the "Story" heading should be something different, and the article should be written as everything "according to the book" or "according to Suskind" (whether placed once at the beginning, or sporadically through the prose), and not use "apparently" or "seemingly" to descrube disputed claims from the book. Newnam 18:00, 5 July 2006 (UTC)