Talk:The One with All the Thanksgivings/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 03:52, 22 April 2012 (UTC)

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 22:34, 25 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Phoebe (Lisa Kudrow) losing an arm in past lives should be "Phoebe (Lisa Kudrow) losing arms in past lives"
 * "accidentally cutting off Chandler's toe after calling her "fat" in their first encounter." should be "accidentally cutting off Chandler's toe after he called her "fat" in their first encounter."
 * "When Monica begs Chandler to forgive," add 'her' after forgive
 * "Monica then tells the group what she thinks is her worst Thanksgiving: in 1987, Ross brings Chandler home for Thanksgiving, where Monica, who is overweight, overhears the latter call her fat." This sentence is very confusing. I'd recommend breaking it up into two and rewording. Who called whom fat and who overheard it?
 * Production: "When discussing for different story ideas" remove 'for'
 * Production: "Therefore it was difficult to keep the characters', particuarly Chandler spontaneously mad for something that happened "years ago"." I think there's a comma missing in here somewhere, also particularly is spelled wrong
 * Production: "A weaving, invisible to the audience was placed…" comma after 'audience'
 * Production: "Due to safety, the scene involving Monica dropping a knife, severing Chandler's toe was pre shot." Change to "Due to safety, the scene involving Monica dropping a knife and severing Chandler's toe was pre-shot."
 * Production: add a reference to the last sentence of the production section
 * Cultural References: "The inspiration for Phoebe's character in a past life spurting blood was the Bassomatic commercial on Saturday Night Live, starring Dan Aykroyd." Maybe explain this a little better.
 * Reception: "The authors of Friends Like Us: The Unofficial Guide to Friends write…" Change 'write' to 'wrote'
 * References: On No. 10, you can remove 'staff writer' and just leave it blank
 * Thank you for reviewing, I believe all concerns have been addressed now. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 12:30, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:17, 27 April 2012 (UTC)