Talk:The Otto Show/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 02:23, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I've reviewed this in accordance with April's GAN Backlog Elimination Drive, and have placed it on hold until the below issue can be fixed. Good luck.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 02:23, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Very few issues here. In Lead:
 * Add the overall number of the episode (i.e., and 57th episode overall)
 * The current intro is the one used on pretty much every other episode page. It's overall number isn't really that relevant, and it's already in the infobox.
 * Wikilink to Bart.
 * Done.
 * "and Spinal Tap was ranked as the 18th best guest appearance by IGN." -> "guest appearance on the show by IGN."
 * Done.

In Plot:
 * Wikilink to Snake.
 * Done.
 * Wikilink to Marge.
 * Wikilink to Homer.
 * Homer and Marge are already linked in the lead.
 * "even considers faking his own death." → "and even considers[...]"
 * Done.

Final say

 * Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion 0422  00:17, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Passing.  The Flash  I am Jack's   complete   lack of surprise 15:56, 10 April 2010 (UTC)