Talk:The Pleiades (volcano group)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:44, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
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 * "140 kilometres (87 mi)[3]-120 kilometres (75 mi) away" - Use an endash
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "It is formed by three separate cones" - What is it? I'm assuming it's the compound stratovolcano, can this be made more clear?
 * Mount Atlas. The toponyms Mount Atlas and Mount Pleiones are used in a incoherent manner in most sources. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "but much smaller" --> "but is much smaller"
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " but much smaller, it has two poorly defined craters" - Either replace the comma with a semicolon or break the sentence there.
 * Broke the sentence here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Taygete Cone 6 kilometres (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas" --> "Taygete Cone, which is 6 kilometers (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas,"
 * Sure? To me this looks like correct grammar. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Apart from lava flows " --> "Apart from the lava flows"
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * AD is duplinked
 * "A glass layer " - Link this to volcanic glass, I'm assuming that's the intended meaning.
 * Seems like, added a link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * If I'm reading MOS:DASH correctly, the ranges of years in the Eruption history section should have en dashes.
 * Seems like, added them. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

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 * Ref 1 needs an accessdate

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Placing on hold, not much to do on this one. Hog Farm (talk) 03:33, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Good work. Promoting. 15:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)