Talk:The Power of Three (Doctor Who)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:53, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Who can resist cute little cubes?  Ruby  2010/  2013  05:53, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * There is one deadlink
 * Do you mean dablink? And the tool says there is one, but I've searched and it's not on the page. It also says it does not exist when I used dabsolver. Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Oops that's what I meant. And yeah, I can't find the link either. Must be an error.  Ruby  2010/  2013  00:10, 12 November 2012 (UTC)


 * I would suggest adding in ratings info into the lead, and then splitting that and critical reception into another paragraph (looks better when paragraphs are roughly the same size)
 * Done. How did I forget the ratings? Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Good plot summary -- long but still as concise as possible
 * "At one point, the Doctor, Amy, and Rory relax and eat fish fingers and custard, a reference throughout the Eleventh Doctor's tenure" -- do you mean since he first appeared?
 * It's actually mentioned in "The Impossible Astronaut" and "The Doctor's Wife" too, but I changed it and added another ref
 * "watched by 5.49 million live" -> watched by an audience of 5.49 million live
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Any BBC America ratings?
 * No, they are only announced if it's a record-breaking premiere, unfortunately. The last entry in "TV by the Numbers" is "Asylum of the Daleks". Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * "... weaknesses of some [Davies'] adventures..." -- some of [Davies'] adventures?
 * Oops. Fixed. Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * End direct quotations with citations
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

As always, not too many issues here. I'll place the article on hold for seven days. Nice work,  Ruby  2010/  2013  03:51, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I believe I've fixed everything. I also added the read-through date because I found the Fourth Dimension entry for the episode. Glimmer721  talk  16:54, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Happy to pass this one. Why can't Christmas be tomorrow!? :/  Ruby  2010/  2013  00:10, 12 November 2012 (UTC)