Talk:The Promise (2016 film)

Semi-protected edit request on 29 April 2017
Please add under the section IMDb pre-release voting controversy: "Efforts to fight against this IMDb voting controversy have gone viral; a video by Harvard student Michael He received over 300,000 views within a few weeks". 65.112.8.1 (talk) 13:51, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
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During!
I've just reverted "during the final years of the Ottoman Empire, and the Armenian Genocide" to "during the final years of the Ottoman Empire, and during the Armenian Genocide".

I appreciate the intention was to remove an apparently redundant "during", but the difficulty with that is then one has a floating comma which doesn't belong in the sentence. Remove that? Then it says "during the final years of the Ottoman Empire and the Armenian Genocide" which could be read as meaning the final years of the Armenian Genocide.

Ha! But we can do better. Give me a moment. Pinkbeast (talk) 12:53, 13 June 2017 (UTC)