Talk:The Pussycat Dolls Tour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

I will get to work on this soon! --K. Peake 08:39, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * The Pussycat Dolls → the Pussycat Dolls per MOS:THEMUSIC - 	✅
 * "announced that the Dolls were reforming for" → "revealed that they were reforming for"		✅
 * "was involved in the conversations to reunite but decided to" → "declined to reunite but decided to" per the body, unless you can source actual discussion about a reunion 		✅
 * "with ten dates across" → "with 10 dates across" per MOS:NUM 	✅
 * "(Romania) and Super Bloom" → "(Romania), and Superbloom Festival" per the body 		✅
 * "in January 2022 with the fate of the group" → "in January 2022 with the fate of the Pussycat Dolls" 	✅

Background

 * Imgs look good!
 * "The group performed for" → "The Pussycat Dolls performed for" 	✅
 * "UK reality tv competition, The X Factor: Celebrity where" → "UK reality TV competition The X Factor: Celebrity, where" 	✅
 * "a new song "React" and have since confirmed that new music is in production alongside" → "a new song titled "React" and subsequently confirmed new music being in production alongside" 	✅
 * "member, Melody Thornton decided not to reunite with the group" → "member Melody Thornton decided not to reunite with them" 	✅
 * "to tour the UK and Ireland," → "to tour the UK," per the source 	✅
 * "noted that the group" → "noted that the Pussycat Dolls" 	✅
 * "in the making" and tour was" → "in the making", and the tour was" 	✅
 * The Brighton Pride appearance is not sourced as part of the tour 	✅-

Changes to scheduling

 * "The tour's first leg was" → "The Pussycat Doll Tour's first leg was" per this being a new section 	✅
 * "visiting 9 venues" → "visiting nine venues" per MOS:NUM 	✅
 * Make sure you are invoking the correct source(s) for each sentence or continuous group of sentences 	✅
 * "postponed for a year; with confirmation" → "postponed for a year, with confirmation" 	✅
 * "As of April 2020, the tour" → "By April 2020, the tour" 	✅
 * "in Dundee, Scotland before" → "in Dundee, Scotland, before" 	✅
 * "Philippines, Japan and Oceania have" → "the Philippines, Japan, and Oceania, have" 	✅

≫  Lil- Unique1  -{ Talk  }- 21:58, 22 June 2022 (UTC)

Legal dispute and cancellation

 * "Robin and Nicole, And so I" → "Robin and Nicole. And so I" on the quote box ✅
 * Pipe Los Angeles Superior Court to Los Angeles County Superior Court ✅
 * Pipe Memorandum of Understanding to Memorandum of understanding ✅
 * "Wyatt and Antin also" → "Wyatt, and Antin also" ✅
 * "5% reflecting that she left before the release of the group's second album," → "5%, reflecting that she left before the release of the group's second album" ✅
 * "that would handle future earning from the group" → "that would handle the future of the Pussycat Dolls" ✅
 * "the partnership with Antin" → "the partnership" with Antin" per the actual quote ending there ✅
 * "as well as accusing Antin of" → "as well as accusing her of" ✅
 * Any sentences with usage of direct quotes should have the appropriate ref(s) invoked at the end ✅
 * "on an Instagram story post." → "in an Instagram Story post." with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT ✅
 * "Not long after group members" → "Not long after, group members" ✅
 * "writing their own statement saying" → "writing their own statement, saying:" ✅
 * "sacrifices"... and later confirming" → "sacrifices" and further confirming" ✅
 * "of the group stating that" → "of the group, stating that" ✅
 * "will live on."" → "will live on"." per MOS:QUOTE ✅

Arena shows

 * [20][21][22][23][24][25][26][27][10] is too many refs together; move them to different areas of the title ✅
 * Pipe Mall of Asia Arena to SM Mall of Asia Arena ✅
 * Pipe Unimed Hall to Vibra São Paulo ✅
 * Are you sure the O2 Arena should really be stylized as you've done here since it is not styled as such in the actual article? ✅
 * Pipe The SSE Hydro to OVO Hydro ✅

Festival and international shows

 * Pipe Melbourne Arena to John Cain Arena ✅
 * Pipe Horncastle Arena to Christchurch Arena ✅

Reception

 * "On December 6, 2019," → "On November 6, 2019," ✅
 * "on April 19 after" → "on April 19, 2020, after" however, the source backs up May dates and does not mention anything selling out ✅

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 16:38, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi I believe everything has been addressed. Comments where I left them are in . ≫  Lil- Unique1  -{  Talk  }- 20:19, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
 * This article definitely has been improved now and I did some copy editing too, however the dates in reception are still not backed up as being in April 2020. --K. Peake 06:57, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks . I've been and changed that reference - I hadn't released that because of so many changes to the tour dates, the original source had degraded. ≫  Lil- Unique1  -{ Talk  }- 10:24, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Kudos for finding the correct reference after that time, though I quickly changed it to publisher for you instead. ✅ now, fabulous job especially on the pace! --K. Peake 11:17, 24 June 2022 (UTC)