Talk:The Q (nightclub)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:27, 6 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi,, and thanks for taking on this review! Armadillo  pteryx  19:59, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries, I'll try to get to it in the next couple of days. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:00, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments Tidy work, no major issues. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:19, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "as game-changing" often written... in what sense?
 * The sources don't explicitly qualify the term, but from context it appears that "innovative" is synonymous in intention. I've swapped "game-changing" out of the lead but left it in the direct quote in the Reception section. Does that work?
 * "and DJ; Bob Fluet" is that semi-colon deliberate?
 * Ah, I get it. It's confusing for me.  Why not just use commas to separate these folks?
 * It's because the list contains three items, each of which in turn contains one comma. Replacing the semicolons with commas would make it seem like a list of six separate items. I was following the guidance at MOS:SEMICOLON, which says: Semicolons are used in addition to commas to separate items in a listing, when commas alone would result in confusion.
 * "Gentlethem's Club" what's that?
 * A portmanteau of "gentlemen's club" and accusative singular they. I struggled to come up with a good wikilink target for this; definitely open to suggestions.
 * I think that explanation is fine, but should be a footnote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:12, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * ""20-foot ceilings" convert.
 * "queer movie" overlinked.
 * "Alvord of Thrillist called" overlinked.
 * "semi-drag queens were doing" overlinked.
 * "Michael Musto, describing" overlinked.
 * ✅ (and thanks for catching all those)!
 * ""[e]ach floor" I'm okay with just "each floor" if all you're doing is decapping for sentence case here.
 * "semi-drag queens were doing" overlinked.
 * "Michael Musto, describing" overlinked.
 * ✅ (and thanks for catching all those)!
 * ""[e]ach floor" I'm okay with just "each floor" if all you're doing is decapping for sentence case here.
 * ""[e]ach floor" I'm okay with just "each floor" if all you're doing is decapping for sentence case here.
 * Thank you for your helpful comments! Armadillo  pteryx  01:28, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No problem, one response above, but nothing to stop promotion. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:12, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
 * I've now edited the article according to that response. Thank you for the review! Armadillo  pteryx  12:56, 7 September 2021 (UTC)