Talk:The Queen's Head, Toodyay

James Everett's future
Re: Contrary to general belief, Everett did not die during the voyage.... - it's not just "general belief", it's two reliable sources. If the Wikipedia article is to disagree with those sources, we'll need another (more) reliable - and published - source and probably a note as to why we think the first two sources are not reliable in this case.

However, given that the article is about the hotel, not the person, there's no need to include the details of what happened to him after he left Toodyay, so I've removed them. Mitch Ames (talk) 06:10, 8 September 2018 (UTC)

Everett - sale of goods and property
I'm not happy with this:

Was his "aim" to get 1500 pounds for everything? Having that sentence in a separate paragraph makes no sense if that is the case. Perhaps it would be simpler to say

If he did not actually get 1500, we could just remove "for 1500 pounds" from the above. Checking the reference doesn't help me - The Road to Toodyay says

It doesn't say how much he actually got for the properties. Mitch Ames (talk) 06:37, 8 September 2018 (UTC)