Talk:The Ramona Pageant

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Hi, I plan to separate the "History and description" section into two independent sections and renaming "Description" to "Overview". In the "History" section, I will add a subsection dedicated to a detailed downplay of Ramona Lubo and her impact on Southern California, who was Helen Hunt Jackson's inspiration for the play. In the "Overview" section, I will add descriptions of how the play came to be, as well as how it evolved over the years. I also plan to add more content in the article summary, since it is lacking background and synopsis.

Sources:

Brigandi, Phil. “Ramona - History and Myth in Southern California.” So Cal Historyland, Phil Brigandi, www.socalhistoryland.mysite.com/article_10.html.

Brook, Vincent. Land of Smoke and Mirrors: A Cultural History of Los Angeles. Rutgers University Press, 2013. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt5hjck3.

DeLyser, Dydia. “Ramona Memories: Fiction, Tourist Practices, and Placing the Past in Southern California.” Annals of the Association of American Geographers, vol. 93, no. 4, 2003, pp. 886–908. JSTOR, JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/1515360.

Hemet Area Museum Association. "Hemet." Google Books, 2008, https://books.google.com/books?id=AZCPlMoFDJoC&pg=PA81&dq=dorise+schukow+ramona&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj64Pq6ifLYAhVN1WMKHaoPB98Q6AEIJzAA#v=onepage&q=dorise%20schukow%20ramona&f=false

Ferrarix5a (talk) 03:06, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

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Ramona Pageant
I think it needs more history/background information about the Ramona Pageant. It is too general ad bland to start with, it needs to be able to grab the readers attention by sharing as much information as possible. It is a good start but I think the more digging you do about the topic the more information you'll find. For example go back to when it started and how it has evolved throughout the years till today. Try to share how it changed gradually and why it did. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gamarroquin (talk • contribs) 09:05, 12 February 2018 (UTC)