Talk:The Ravages of Time

(14/03/07) Have revised the plot section. Removed repititions and redundant ideas. Should this section be expanded to cover the entire story so far in detail, or should it be restricted to a summary? What say you?

Re: Sun Tzu's Art of War: I couldn't think of where had Sun Tzu's Art of War has been mentioned in the manhua (I sure there was).I was hoping that by leaving it in others can fill it up. Is that considered as "okay"? --Extrakun 06:48, 8 July 2006 (UTC)

It's okay...but I'm just thinking that refering to the Art of War isn't a big deal (or unique to the manhua) because many other things refer to the Art of War as well. Unless, if you think the Art of War plays a big part in the manhua, then you can add it back in. _dk 08:32, 8 July 2006 (UTC)

Re: Plot
Attempting to flesh out the plot a bit more, but I think my work really need editing Extrakun 20:13, 6 September 2007 (UTC)

- Completed Lu Bu's Downfall. I have previously written the first draft of # 1.1.3 Liu Bei's fortune and misfortune (Vol 22), # 1.1.4 Sun Ce's rise to power and Debut of Zhou Yu (Vol 15 - 18, 20 - 21) & # 1.1.5 Pang Tong's debut, Alliance against Cao Cao, and Massacre of Sima clan (Vol 23 - 25), along with other small edits. In case people are wondering why the ip is different, it is because I edit those in a school library.

Originally, I gave a more detailed plot description of the three arcs, hoping that people will edit out the unnecessary parts (afterall, deleting/editing is a lot easier to adding and I was willing to do the hard part at the time). However, it turns that wasn't going to happen and certain areas was getting longer.

Because of this, I will written down what is appropriate, in terms of length and content (obviously, this is in my opinion; if someone can shorten it without decreasing the content, feel free to do so). My criteria (roughly) are : about 1 page lengh (about 500 words), have a outline of the arc but not the details. In terms of content, Liu Bei's fortune and misfortune is missing the part where Lu Bu finally drives Liu Bei away and how he enter Cao Cao's force (about chapter 215-222).

As I am new to writing Wikipedia articles, I dont know what I have done so far is correct or not. Please write your suggestions/advices/comments here so I can read it. As of now, I dont have a wiki account.

The reason why I am typing these things is because I dont think I have time to write any new sections for a long time. Hope someone can continue edit this wiki page.

- —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.94.30.7 (talk) 04:43, 2 March 2009 (UTC) - Sima Yi's age

It is not really that much of a stretch, the story starts in 189-190 AD, depicting him as a young teen, when in reality he was roughly 10-11 years old, it stretch a few years maybe but not that much.