Talk:The Real Cool Killers

Characters
Working on adding in a characters section. I worked on this article before, but we do need to cut the plot down. If you read any good article you will find that the entire book is not spelled out. (Crweeks (talk) 21:54, 9 July 2010 (UTC))

I agree the plot ran waaaaay long. If anyone wants to take a whack at cutting it down I am all for it. I'd likely be less impartial when cutting content. I think a character section would be helpful so that you don't need to introduce each person in the plot summary. HunterBond (talk) 20:17, 11 July 2010 (UTC)

Total Rewrite
I pretty much re-wrote this article's plot from scratch as the one it had was very shallow, and was written poorly. Mine may run a little long, but the book's complex plot is hard to explain without going in depth. If anyone would like to help improve this article it could still use a section on analysis, which I plan on writing but would appreciate any help. The article would also benefit from having all direct references to plot points given page number references. Hope this makes the article better, the book deserved it.HunterBond (talk) 17:41, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Ummm
Uhmm.. Mrs. Cindy? when im trying to add correction to the page is only shows me the reference edit box not the text itself
 * If I understand what you're saying, all you need to do is click the Show Preview button, right next to the Save Page button.  Δnnuit   Cœptis  01:22, 4 May 2009 (UTC)