Talk:The Red Danube

Grammar and sequence of words
...in the last paragraph: "When Hooky and Mother Superior receive a visit from Piniev, who is looking for Maria, they refuse to co-operate. The next day, in response to his brief, Hooky is ordered to fly to Rome as a representative to a United Nations conference to end forcible repatriation, and helps Mother Superior join him to see the Pope on the same issue. On his return, he and Catlock are informed by Piniev that unless Maria is surrendered immediately, the Soviets will cease cooperating with the British on all other matters. Catlock orders Hooky to do so but he refuses and is fired him from his job. Meanwhile, Twingo and Maria plan on moving to Scotland, when she is suddenly captured by Hooky's replacement, the pompous and rigid Colonel Omicron, who intends to turn her in to Piniev. Realizing her fate, she jumps out of a window and succumbs to her injuries. Shortly after, Hooky is assigned to an operation called "Humanizing the Army" and forcible repatriation is ended." 1/ "and helps Mother Superior join him to see the Pope on the same issue." should read "and Mother Superior helps join him to see the Pope on the same issue." 2/ "Catlock orders Hooky to do so but he refuses and is fired ???him??? from his job." possibly "Catlock orders Hooky to do so but he refuses and is fired BY him from his job." 3/ "and rigid Colonel Omicron, who intends to turn her in to Piniev." possibly "and rigid Colonel Omicron, who intends to turn her OVER to Piniev." 80.151.9.187 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 09:59, 7 September 2020 (UTC)