Talk:The Return of the Space Cowboy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:27, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Its lyrics also addressed..." I don't think "also" is needed.
 * "from their first album" -> "from Jamiroquai's first album"
 * "in the UK" link for chart?
 * "certified" link.
 * "tale…" ellipsis should be non-breaking space followed by "..." Check others.
 * "The album recording took place in the" -> The album was recored at..."
 * "The latin-tinged" Latin
 * "sixth track "The Kids" is an "aggressive" track" track .. track repetitive.
 * "track Van Gelder played drums on" -> "track on which Van Gelder played drums"
 * "It was also released under" is that a re-release?
 * "the UK chart" name of chart and link?
 * "was certified Platinum" link certified, no need to capitalise Platinum.
 * You use "ranked" four times in four sentences, needs mixing up a little.
 * Gold doesn't need capitalising.
 * "and Johnny Guitar Watson" "Guitar" normally in quotes.
 * turntables and design need en-dash, not hyphen.
 * "Summaries" row moves and is thus useless.
 * Check refs for spaced hyphens, they should be en-dashes.
 * No SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * Should have the addressed all these issues. 웃 O O  21:55, 4 September 2021 (UTC)