Talk:The Right Brothers

Starting the article
Starting the article with "They have been highly ridiculed" is not a good way to go. Mentioning their criticism makes perfect sense, but to simply state they are ridiculed as an introduction to who they are is rediculous.

It also makes the claim that they ahve gained "notoriety" for supporting Bush and the Iraq War. Whether its notoriety or not is a matter of opinion. Recognition would be a much more neutral word.

This article also claims that events since the releasing of the song "Bush was Right" have proved Bush wasnt right. This is not NPOV.


 * "Recognition" isn't quite as POV as "notoriety," but it has a definite positive connotation. john k (talk) 18:35, 16 January 2009 (UTC)