Talk:The Salvation (film)

Plot !?
Should the plot reveal more or less everything that happens ? Personally, I prefer the plot to give a brief explanation of what kind of film it is, the background and possibly describe some main characters. This plot is in my opinion a too detailed and far too revealing one. Boeing720 (talk) 01:57, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I agree Boeing720, the plot summary looks overly long and too detailed (see WP:FILMPLOT). Feel free to precis it down to around 400-700 words - or I will try to when I have the time. JezGrove (talk) 09:49, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I have watched the film once only. Perhaps you can do it better ? I would keep the background stuff (why they have come to America), perhaps described the "Dilligence scenes" (including their intended travel company becomes changed in the last moment, from ordinary people to the bandits - a critical moment, but not too revealing). Perhaps phrases like "as the former prisoner(s ?) is(are ?) getting drunk, his(their ?) interest in the wife increases" ... "leading to a total disaster, for which vengeance is called".. "but the brothers are not dealing with ordinary crooks" - something in line with that. Perhaps. No details of how the band members are killed on by one etc. I might return, but I really need to refresh my memory. The important thing is to not reveal it all, I think. Thanks Boeing720 (talk) 21:18, 20 January 2018 (UTC)