Talk:The Sarah Jane Adventures/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 12:17, 18 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I will conduct a full review once certain things have been addressed, which need to be done within 7 days:
 * Please address all citation needed and original research tags.
 * Article on hold. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 12:17, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The article needs a thorough copyedit. For example, there should be no space between consecutive references; the standard of English is poor in much of the article. Consider the audiobooks section alone:

See if you can apply these ideas to the whole article. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 15:49, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
 * "Series star" - not encyclopedic wording;
 * "Minute" should not be capitalised, and, preferably, with a non-breaking space before it;
 * "called "The Monster Hunt" written by Trevor Baxendale, read by Anjli Mohindra this episode" - grammar.
 * "Both parts can only be downloaded by finding aliens" really? surely this gimmick is not notable. The fact they can be found on the website is sufficient;
 * "Sarah Jane Adventures" - self redirect;
 * "Website" - should be "website"
 * "It is unclear if these will be the last stories, ending with the series, or if they will carry on after series 5 has ended." - poorly worded for an encyclopedia.
 * Amazon is not a reliable source and these should be replaced. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 17:41, 26 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Who would you recomend to be a reliable source? Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 14:53, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Any independent media source that mentions the existence of such a DVD, preferably. I'd be prepared to accept one from the BBC or its affiliates in these locations, though. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 18:10, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The references for the existence of DVDs and Blu-ray have been changed to BBC Shop and 2 Entertain links which are official BBC websites. thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 18:38, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * There are some others in the "audiobooks" section. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 19:36, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The Audiobook section is references have been amended, I think the Novelisations has a lot of Amazon references so i will find other official references for them. Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 15:24, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The Novelisations section references has now been amended is there anything else that needs to be done. Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 16:18, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry to do it it drabs, but #18 isn't broken and #73 and #74 need more details (date, page, ISSN(?)). Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 21:21, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The above items you described have no been resolved thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 16:25, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
 * The citation needed tags need filling with citations. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 17:20, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
 * All Citations have now been resolved. Thanks Kelvin 101 (talk) 18:02, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Please expand the section that I have now marked as requiring expansion. I think that may be all. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 19:57, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I have expanded on the Critical response section.  Tsange  ☯ Talk 18:30, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Although I would have liked some more "reputable" critics, there's enough there to satisfy the criteria. Passing. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 19:22, 1 January 2012 (UTC)