Talk:The Second Coming (Heroes)

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Writing Style
The writing style for the article appears to be somewhat unencyclopedic, and more journalistic. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.15.246.147 (talk) 14:24, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

I cleaned up the writing somewhat, trying to keep it all in the same tense, and got rid of all the editorial comments. Realistically, though, someone should probably just fully rewrite the synopsis to not sound so simplistic and juvinile.198.169.127.193 (talk) 14:58, 26 September 2008 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 198.169.127.193 (talk)