Talk:The Secret of the Nagas

Few problems
Hi! I spotted a few problems with this article and figured I'd list them here: Nothing too big, and thank you for contributing such a great article to Wikipedia. --Odie5533 (talk) 17:22, 7 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The second sentence of the lead does not specify who they are.
 * Sati should be wikilinked to something.
 * The English in the lead needs some copyediting: Later(comma) he(who?) takes his troop(of what?) and travels far east to the land of Branga, where he wishes to find a clue(find a clue is probably not the best way to put this) to reach the Nagas(is Naga plural, or is Nagas the plural form?). Shiva also comes to know learns that Sati's first child is still alive, as is as well as her Sati's twin sister. His journey ultimately leads him to the Naga capital of Panchavati(wikilink?), where he finds a surprise waiting for him.
 * Thanks a lot Odie5533 for copyediting the article and for taking a look. I will surely incorporate your suggestions shortly. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 12:02, 8 September 2011 (UTC)