Talk:The Series Finale/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "Wanda Maximoff's chaos magic".
 * Add a serial comma after "re-assembled" (American English).
 * Also remove the comma after "Maximoff's magic".
 * "survived development of the episode" – reword
 * Add hyphens between "fine tune" and "self acceptance".
 * "before beung changed" – typo
 * "labelling" "labeling" (American English)
 * "eratic-looking" – typo
 * Add a comma after "In some instances".
 * "this episodes" – typo
 * "given freedom" "given the freedom"
 * WP:RECEPTION: More reviews, less quotes.
 * "CHris Gridley" – typo
 * Be consistent with The Art of VFX and Art of VFX.
 * Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
 * Did you mean to pass this one yet? No one has addressed the issues you brought up. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 01:42, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Please ignore that last comment. I don't know where my brain is at. I thought these comments were new for the 14th, not from the 11th, and addressed your comments. Apologies and thanks for reviewing all the WandaVision nominations! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 02:49, 15 September 2021 (UTC)