Talk:The Shadow of the Past/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"?
 * No, in that pair of years.
 * Mention Frodo's last name.
 * Done.

History

 * Link philologist.
 * Linked.
 * "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"
 * As above.
 * "young cousin Bingo" Bingo? This needs a in square brackets explanation.
 * Glossed.
 * In "The crucial chapter", capitalize the races (hobbits, elfs), unless it was done intentionally?
 * Hey, did you miss this? Everything else is done, so as soon as this is addressed the article can be passed. AryKun (talk) 09:08, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Ah yes, done.
 * "protagonist, Frodo" → Add last name.
 * Done.

Plot

 * "The wizard Gandalf" → In other articles, I've seen you capitalize Wizard as well.
 * Done.
 * Link Isildur.
 * Moved link to first mention.
 * "a hobbit" → Capitalize.
 * Done.

Structure

 * I don't see "there and back again" in the Tor.com review?
 * Ah yes, it's in the alternative version, the same thoughts presented in a table, which I've added to the citation.

Misc

 * All the refs are reliable and spot-checks on the ones I could access found that they supported what they were used to cite.
 * Noted.
 * I would suggest adding alt text to the images, although it isn't required for GA. AryKun (talk) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * All right, added.

I think that's all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)