Talk:The Slim Shady LP/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 02:58, 12 July 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. Let's start the review, shall we?


 * Lead
 * "It was released on February 23, 1999 under Dr. Dre's Aftermath Entertainment, and Web Records." The comma is unnecessary.
 * "Recorded in Ferndale, Michigan following Eminem's discovery by Dr. Dre and Jimmy Iovine" Discovery isn't the right word. Recruitment is better in this context.


 * Background
 * No issues.


 * Recording
 * No issues.


 * Lyrics
 * No issues.


 * Production
 * No issues.


 * Commercial response
 * Why is "platinum" capitalized in mid-sentence? It is a generic term.


 * Critical reception
 * The A.V. Club is a publication, and thus should be italicized.
 * Wikilink Spin.


 * Aftermath
 * No issues.


 * Lawsuits
 * No issues.

That's all. On hold until the issues are resolved. —DAP388 (talk) 19:05, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks a bunch for the review! :) Basilisk4u (talk) 20:45, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good. That's a pass. :) —DAP388 (talk) 01:42, 16 July 2012 (UTC)