Talk:The Snowmen/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 12:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

I might as well jump in on this one as I reviewed it last time around and it was close then, so its good to see it back here. Will review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 12:02, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

Yep. Forgot. :)

Ok, I'm picking up seven duplicate links towards the mid to end of the article. If you don't have the DYK checker installed let me know and I'll specific exactly which links they are.
 * I don't have that add-on. Glimmer721  talk  00:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

Toolserver seems to be playing up so can't check dab or dead links. But there wasn't any before, so I'm sure its probably fine now.
 * Mine works; it has no dab or dead links. Glimmer721  talk  00:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

The mentions of Vastra, Jenny and Strax should be accompanied by the actor names in brackets afterwards. Its up to you if you want to repeat that in both the lead and the plot section, but it should be at least in the lead.
 * Done. Glimmer721  talk  00:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

Continuity: Is it worthwhile mentioning that the Great Intelligence returned again in the following episode, "The Bells of Saint John"?
 * I added it, as well as the actor (with ref)...if in the future production information comes up about the Great Intelligence then I'll add that too. Glimmer721  talk  00:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

Prose is as good as it was before. Article isn't far off GA standards at all, in fact it might be a worthy article to take up to FA if you were so inclined, although if you were then I'd suggest getting someone to do a FA-style prose check (as you can never be too careful) and they're bound to criticise the length of the synopsis subsection and probably want it reduced down to three paragraphs. Let me know when you've made those handful of changes, and let me know if you need me to be more specific about the duplicate links. Miyagawa (talk) 19:09, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
 * "The Eleventh Hour" is the highest on my FA list, though I'm a bit afraid to go further...this one would probably benefit from historicization after the fact (for example, why did they want to bring back the Great Intelligence?), etc. Once a Commons image of Jenna Louise-Coleman becomes available I am planning to put that in the production section, and maybe recycling the promo poster to the "Promotional" section in the Doctor Who (series 7) page because it fits there better. But as for now I figured I'd leave it. Glimmer721  talk  00:42, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Great. I think this one now meets the GA requirements. Miyagawa (talk) 21:58, 23 April 2013 (UTC)